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My friends like me because I think outside the box. I can be honest, sometimes too much.  Responsive, open for discussion and I can analyse any asked question and find most logical explanation of it in my point of view.  
That is about it what they have told me. It is much easier to write about myself a few words. I like about myself all those things that my friends said and willpower to seek for knowledge. I like that I think before I do, but in some cases it is not convenient, like in times when you have to make fast choices for all or nothing. I am still young. Character grows with ages and while I don’t have any experience in life, I can tell with all my heart that I am too shallow and narrow in my opinions to write about something that does not even exist yet.

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