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Christmas is the most beautiful time of the year. The time when you belive in yourself and in others.

Lost towns, countries, continents... The world is cnanging and people with him. But some things are not remain.
Water, earth, sun, wind. Frost contains water and wind. Earth is cold and covered in white snow. The Sun is not give us warm every morning. The Sun is far away from the earth so he has been waiting for his hour  to coming back in the spring. Now it is only occasionally appears in the sky as well-dressed Christmas toys. Season called winter reigned over all of us. And at the same time, every year on Christmas, Frost and Sun have entered into a dispute. Sun has been wanted to prove that the heat in this time of year can melt ice and snow. Frost only laught at him.

In an unknown town named "N" has been occurring incedent which would cause shudders even severe Frost. Not far from the bookshop opposite the pub there is calm and quiet house. It is a very old building, so through a gap in his house crept cold . Residents of the house is a small family, who has arrived in a small town for search of a better life. But in the end they are left in squalor and poverty.
Look, mistress sitting in her chair and kniting clothes for her son. Father at this time tossing wood into the stove, where the cooking Christmas soup. The son of the mistress quietly painting festival cards with coloured for his family. His father has bough him pencils.
I can not say that this is an ideal family. They are quarrel, they are cry, parents are not always right in the upbringing of thyey son. But at the Christmas we spend a lot of time together.

- Frost, it seems that you have losing this debate.

- What are you saying? Christmas is caming, cold has been dominating in the city and you're still far from earth.

- I disagree with you, my brother. The heat in our hearts have never dying down as human faith. Christmas holiday is a celebration of warmth and dreams.

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