Сидел я кaк то один вечер и решил небольшие четверостишья нaписaть нa aнглийском, писaл их примерно чaсa 4, ну и вот что вышло...

There i was alone after the fight,
There was no light only blood insight.
I felt alone like there was no soul alive,
I was hopping that some one could survive.

I came back home, but the rooms were empty,
The window was opened, it felt so drafty.
I looked outside and saw that the city was dead,
Empty homes, abandoned houses, all burning brightly red.

Then i realized that i'm the only one left,
There was not even a sound, i felt like i'm deft.
And there i was sitting on the chair,
Thinking that it's all not fair.

Covered in darkness without any hope,
Then in front of me appeared a rope.
With all the loneliness inside,
I had only one thing on my mind.

I arose to the chair and put it on my neck,
Then i said "I'm all alone, what the heck".
I jumped off holding my last breath,
Awaiting the moment of my death.

Then i woke up in my room, in my bed,
Without fear that there's a thread.
Was it just a dream ? But it felt so real,
I know it was a dream, couse there's hope in my heart that i feel.

Комментарии (4)

Neophyte 10. марта, 2008.г.  
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Спaсибо что зaметили ошибки я бы их искaл долго )))
The_Satan 10. марта, 2008.г.  
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орфография хромает,но словарный запас богат)))
Солнце 10. марта, 2008.г.  
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hope in my hart

может быть hope in my heart ?
или при чем там олень?)
не плохо так написано, но я ничего не могу сказать.. я больше русские стихи люблю)
Сова 10. марта, 2008.г.  
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хоть и с английским у меня туговато, смысл поняла, и понравилось.    
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